Thursday, 9 June 2016

Argument Writing

             The School day should go to 5:00pm


I disagree firstly children would get tired I would be hard to learn. Secondly children have dinner at this time so they might get very hungry. Finally kids many have very important events to go to at this time.


Firstly, When kids have not got enough sleep you may get very cranky and not be able to concentrate on your school work. If kids do not get enough sleep it can do damage to your brain and giving your child a bad education. Rearch show you can very sick. When kids are sick they are missing very valuable learning time. Sleep is very important it can even increase your chances of getting cancer. Not only can missed sleep make you forgetful, There also a body growing research  around sleep and it’s vey impact on learning and memory.


Secondly,  Hungry hurts kids. Educators who regularly see children at school describe a host of problems inability to concentrate lack of energy 88% , Motivation 87%, Poor academic performance 84%, Tiredness 82%, Behaviour 65%, Students feeling sick 53%


Finally, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body healthy. Exercise helps people lose weight and lower the risk of some diseases. Exercising to maintain a healthy weight decreases a person’s risk of developing certain diseases, including to types of diabetes and high blood pressure.


In conclusion I strongly think school should finish at 3:00 because kids will get tired secondly children will get hungry finally children may have very important events to go to.


By Ciara

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