Monday's Writing

Today Mrs Bron Got Room 20 to do a piece of descriptive writing. We wrote about Fruit Burst We first had to describe the way it looked the way our body moved how we felt. Then we did the smell and final the way it tasted

The square green lolly sit's their haunting me.

As I miserably stare silva rapidly rushes down my face wide eye's glance. As I dissolve the concentrated sour chewy lolliey. It clings on to my shiny achy teeth. Slowly the desirable appetizing smell wafted up my nose. Then their was nothing